Hi. Now when all remixes are available on the Italian Rockaz' website I would like to present my rmx just to get some comments.
It's my first italo dance track and it's rly important to see how my work is noticed by italo dance experts 
http://www12.zippyshare.com/v/5585800/file.html
I hope you will like it.

rox sound / melody



The vocal cutting sounds horrible to be honest and it ruins the whole intro.. Your bass does not have enough power - it needs some tuba-power. The main synth sound is not very good and sounds like it's played in a tube, cave or something.
One thing you do know is how to build up a track, what I think you need is to listen to more italo from different artists to learn the style.
I have heard much worse first-tries though
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